OUGD603 - Extended Practice Crit

Penguin

- Really liked the unmade bed idea, would look better with items on it related to the book.
- The cut out design looks too much like Harry Potter with the messy hair and glasses.
- The diary might be too stereotypical
- Talked about spot cream idea, they liked this and suggested I could try it with a tube of toothpaste or even papercut it.

Lifting Tower Projection

- Amber's personal opinion was that it the people looked like aliens being green

- Told to blog about the struggles with the brief changes. 

- Liked the simplicity, not much feedback to give other than the limited colour scheme.